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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A Poem From My Own Words


Mo7trf
20-01-2008, 01:11 PM
Hey there everyone

how are ya today<<<<< hope good

anyway

I wrote these words from my mind

And I hope it will get your attention

This Poem is talkin' about someone called Mo7trf


And that's the name of this story


http://www.arab.fm/image/uploads/7db5cec3c6.jpg


There's something in your eyes
That Makes me wanna hold you tight Thousand years

There's Somthing in my heart
That Shake's it too fast like I'm sceared

Every time i get free
I only thinking about my messed up life

Do i have A promise to do
Promises are there for me my hole life

I always asking these questions
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Why the stop sign is Red
Why the move sign is Green
What is love
what is hate
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i couldn't answer any of it
But ....... I've An answer for one question
And the question is
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What is Sadness
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I know the answer for that
I know what sadness is
I know how does the Person feel the sadness
I know what is like in real life

But there's A question I keep saying it all time
And It's
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Am I Sad
Is my heart sad
Is my face sad
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I Guess I rather not to answer that
Because i don't wanna get sad
If I got sad I would shoot myself
And that's my life goes
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Mo7trf_American Language Teacher

Catch Ya All Later

LELO
20-01-2008, 06:05 PM
/،"


بداية اسمح لي ان اجيبك بالعربي..لاني اجيد القراءة بالانجليزيه اكثر من التحدث والكتابة..

المهم..

Every time i get free
I only thinking about my messed up life

Do i have A promise to do
Promises are there for me my hole life

I always asking these questions


كنت اظن التساؤلات هذه تمر معي فقط لكن اتضح لي ان الكل مثلي ^^

Why the stop sign is Red
Why the move sign is Green

هنا اعلم انك تتحدث عنها عاطفيا .. لكن تفسيرها ايضآ يرتبط بالعاطفة..
فاللون الاحمر له تأثير على الاعصاب شديد .. بشد الانتباه..
والاخضر بأراحتها..

من ناحية تساؤلاتك هل انت ، قلبك ، ملامحك ..حزينه؟

فاعتقد ان الاجابة هي لا لان تساؤلاتك وحدها كافيه لاثبات احد الامرين
انت لست حزين لكنك تخاف الحزن لك ولمن تحب من حولك وان تكون بطريق
غير مباشر منحتهم اياه..

او انك فعلا حزين لكنك لاتريد ان تمنح له بابآ .. وتظل في شجاعه تطرده عنك..
اذا كنت كذلك .. فلك مني ألف تحية..

If I got sad I would shoot myself

لكنني اقول لك لاتقس على نفسك كثيرآ فالحزن احيانا ذا فائدة..
والحياة تجارب..

سعيدة برؤية كتاباتك الرائعه هنا ..ومشاركتك لنا بالقسم..
اتمنى ان لا تنقطع عنا أبدآ..
تحيتي لك أ.محترف ^^

/،"

Nahlooly
20-01-2008, 08:10 PM
First of all Welcome mo7trf in An-dr

:love_2: I like what you wrote a lot

Its clear that it is from your heart

I can feel each word of your poem

What is love
what is hate




i couldn't answer any of it
But ....... I've An answer for one question
And the question is



What is Sadness





I know the answer for that



I can sure you that sadness comes from love and hate most of the times

So , if you don’t know what is love and what is hate

Then I think that you don’t know sadness that well

And what I meant by love , is all kinds of it

:please_1: Thanks a lot .. don’t stop writing

:love_1: Coz’ we enjoy it

Gemini
20-01-2008, 08:32 PM
hi Brother m7tarf

:love_2: it is agreat pome

u have a deep feeling in ur heart

keep goning ok

the sadness is not good >>>u r write

i think that u can make it

watting for ur now
:bye_1:

Mo7trf
22-01-2008, 01:06 PM
LELO

First thank you for the reply

you know the real poet write the poems from his life and feeling

and about others people

and yes i was sad for a year maybe

but i got moved on with my life

your reasons was true 100 % sis

go see my new poem now

i'll write it right away

Mo7trf
22-01-2008, 01:12 PM
nahlooly

thanks for your reply

and yeah sadness comes love and hate sometimes

but i didn't got sad cuz love and hate

i got sad from ..... somethin' else i can't told

but like i said to Sis LELO

i moved on with my life

if you wanna know how read my new poem then

thanks again

Mo7trf
22-01-2008, 01:17 PM
and hi to you miss Gemini

yeah my feelin' is really deep

but some sadness is good for the person

thanks for your reply