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Mo7trf 22-01-2008 12:26 PM

Another Poem of My Own Words
 
Hi there

I hope you're ready for my new poem http://www.nokia4arabs.net/forum/ima...ies/cooool.bmp

Another Poem comes out of my poems note book

and with the name of it we start


http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php/i2101_LoveRoad.jpg

A new day is born

but
lies
makes is worse
Why ... why we keep laying

even we're sometimes believe our lies
that's not make anything truth

and ...... wait my
ringbell
..... i'm coming
it's my
newspaper
let us see Ummmm

it talking about my
past poem

i got some answers .....
weird

they want A happy
one
they want a reply for the
sad poem


let's see what makes me a happy guy

i feel happy when
my body feels hot

i feel happy when my eyes opens wide

who makes me happy ? .... easy question

first a real family

who cares about you and taking good care of you

secondThe best friends

who ask for you , worrying about you , sharing stuff with you
and fanily ,
Loves
you

third A moment of Silent

to think about your happy people
your happy times with your real friend and family

fourth and the last yourself

Cherish your body
don't make it shock with bad things
and we all know about that

now i can answer that question

What is
Happiness

only yourself
know the answer for that

wake your
heart

don't let stay in
the dark

release it to
the light

the
light of happiness


and if you're having too much
fun
Run
!! Run as much as you can

and fanily nothing is happy than a
laugh

a laugh inside your heart
that tell you how it feels when it's happy

have a nice happy life
and it's good to stay some times
lonely


now go have a
happy day



Your Friendly Boy

Mo7trf_American Language Teacher
Mo7trf_The Unlovable Boy

Ciao

LELO 01-02-2008 02:38 AM

قصيدتك هذه لاتقل جمالا عن سابقتها ...

وبحثك لا زال مستمرآ.. عن السعادة..

..

اعجبني كثيرآ تساؤلك عمن يمنحك السعادة..


secondThe best friends
who ask for you , worrying about you , sharing stuff with you
and fanily ,
Loves you


اعتقد الاصدقاء حقآ هم أحد اهم العوامل.. ربما على الاقل لدي ^^

fourth and the last yourself
Cherish your body
don't make it shock with bad things
and we all know about that

وايضا الانسان نفسه فقناعاته ورضاه وكما قلت ان لايصدم الانسان نفسه

ويحملها فوق طاقتها ..عامل مهم جدآآآ..

...

راقتني ..كلماتها تلامس المشاعر وتثير التساؤل وتجيب عليه بكل سلاسة..

ننتظر القادم...

دمت قلم معطاء..

لمسات التلي 03-02-2008 06:51 PM

كلمات جميله وهادفه :SnipeR (5):

who makes me happy ? .... easy question
first a real family
who cares about you and taking good care of you

secondThe best friends
who ask for you , worrying about you , sharing stuff with you
and fanily , Loves you


روووووووووووووعه ماشاء الله
أتمنى إنه الواحد يدرك محبت أهله له , ومايفسر نصحهم له بأنهم مايحبونه
وفعلاً الصديق المخلص هو كما قلت

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ودمتم مبدعين

11shoOsha11 04-02-2008 12:15 PM

:SnipeR (48): :SnipeR (48): :SnipeR (48):

gooood one ...like it very much:)l

thanx:shiny:l

jojo** 23-02-2008 03:09 PM

:SnipeR (37): [/size]

....I REALLY LOVE IT :)
THANxx

:msn-wink:


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