More Than words

The Lady · #1 25-12-2007, 06:07 PM

More Than words

لإزالة كل الأعلانات، سجل الآن في منتديات أنيدرا

This is one of my Pomes which I really hope that
you would like it

Dont 4get to tell me what do thing
it mean's alaot to me

Living like this makes it impossible

To have an idea that's incredible
To beg meanings… O' God it's horrible
Like a nice smell words supposed to flew
Make ugliness beautifully glow
In middle of trash a flower grow
That’s what words supposed to do
But no one ever know
Wish if words can be plant
And easily to pick
That simple… that quick
So many kinds to pick
Many choices to choose
Do want any to loss
Each word has its influence like a rose
Each one just an amuse
Hard to pick what to choose
What to do…no one knows
Look for them… dig deep
Don’t just stop and weep
Follow the water seep
Around there… and just there
You well find that it wasn’t impossible
It was enjoyable
Just learn how to be responsible
To make your voice of truth understandable
Believe in your words& any thing else
Will be achievable.

cant wait to see your commments

الموضوع الأصلي : More Than words || الكاتب : The Lady || المصدر : منتديات أنيدرا

**Colourful Hana** · 25-12-2007, 06:36 PM

كلماتك رائعة ^^

مع أنني لا أجيد الإنجليزية <<< نصف الكرم لم تفهمه لوول

أعجبتني هذه الجملة

Each word has its influence like a rose

ما فهمته أن بعض الأشخاص يعتقدون أنهم من الممكن أن يحصلو على مايريدون مثل قطفهم النباتات

لكن الحياة مختلفة

قد تحمل لنا معها بعض الألم

لكن علينا أن لا نتوقف ونبكي فقط بل نواصل المسير بقوة

<<<هل فهمي صحيح؟؟؟ خخخ

تحيتي لك

هانا^^